The sentence, "China is a very communist country, but us America isn’t but our President Nixon found this the perfect opportunity to help." didnt make sense to me?
The huge amounts of conventions and mechanic errors took away from your content--please edit and proof-read your final product more closely. You did have lots of information here and clearly have an appreciation for Nixon!
Dear Aubrie,
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"China is a very communist country, but us America isn’t but our President Nixon found this the perfect opportunity to help."
didnt make sense to me?
Lots of love,
Sabrina!(:
Your biography was a little confusing to me.
ReplyDeleteThe huge amounts of conventions and mechanic errors took away from your content--please edit and proof-read your final product more closely. You did have lots of information here and clearly have an appreciation for Nixon!
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